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From: Becky G
Date: 5/5/2003
Time: 8:31:44 PM
Remote Name: 67.39.145.176
After our discussion in class, I agree that the Achievement for what paper needs a clearer introduction that is more people friendly. It needs to be organized instead of free thoughts thrown into different paragraphs. The questions raised in the intro should be answered in some way throughout the paper not just left open-ended. I completely agree that the framework of the achievement gap is too precise and needs to be clearer. The outline is just too involved. I believe that it will not be difficult at all to cut and paste a few things around and change some of the sentences to link them all together. I think the discussion today went well and the constructive criticism from the group was very effective. Good work groups!