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From: Meg Larew
Date: 4/30/2003
Time: 3:46:44 PM
Remote Name: 131.123.177.29
Achievement for What? A heading on ‘Achievement for What’ would be nice so that we know what the introduction is for. Approach four may need reworded: example: but people are willing to do this so that they can offer more and better for the future. I do believe this statement is a little unclear. There are also other issues of grammar and punctuation in approach four.