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From: Heidi Z.
Date: 4/24/2003
Time: 2:01:42 PM
Remote Name: 131.123.176.219
Hi! Just a suggestion after reading your draft...Within our own group we came to the conclusion that our approaches are more clear when the items (supports, tradeoffs, ect.) are written out in more detail. We discovered this after reading each approach allowed as a group. We felt that the appraoches that got their point across the best were the ones that provided more explanation than the ones that used mere phases and/or simple sentences. So, we have more work to do in this area of some of our approaches. It is just a suggestion because as an outsider, though I got the drift of your supports, drawbacks, ect. it would be so much more clear if more detail or explanation were given. Good luck!